Ooo Second draft

I watch it and i just think how amateur, i wonder what other people must think.. However i have to recognise that there is method to madness (literally). We took so many different shots and angles, we found it hard to decide which were the best to include, so we just dragged all the main shots together and already its way over 2 minutes.. We have so much to do, but we can see it starting to take a nice form even though all we have now is a very, very rough outline.
 ..Need to do something about the sound we could leave the natural noise of the cars passing but maybe lower it and manipulate it to sound less harsh it might work, though we should probably play it safe and use Foley sound or even simpler just music.