Draft No.4

Its getting there but still a long way from where we want it to be, we have almost finished just need the production company and to fix the credits.
We have finally changed that  boring unwanted canvas background, and we have recently had a rethink about our decision to rebel and break the 180 degree rule (at 0.55) It is a bit of an ambitious move to make it could actually work with our psychological confused genre, however our task only covers the first two minutes, we could argue that this is a little too early on in the film to be adding abstract elements that would potentially baffle the audience and we couldn't quite come up with as many reasons it needed to justify our technique so its CUT.
We have used Foley sound of fireworks and loud explosions to replace the fireworks sound from our original footage.
Finally we have used a zoom out an fade to white to add 'closure' to the opening.